The Execution of Talo [CYOA]
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Also I REALLY LOVE THE STATIC
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Oops. I meant 'you think you take a step back'.DreamyPumpkins wrote: ↑06 Jul 2024, 21:00Can I ask for clarification on what you mean if that is okay?You think it you take a step back, but you are not sure.
THANKS! It was a really fun thing to do.
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Ohh gotcha!
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UH OH... quick, under the desk!
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DreamyPumpkins wrote: ↑06 Jul 2024, 21:00 WE SHOULD LISTEN TO THE VOICE, HIDE UNDER THE DESK. I SENSE DANGER.
You struggle, conscious, everything is fuzzy, too much all at once. Every sensation blares in your head, blending together. Your brain is scambled, thoughts disconnected, your talons taste metal and earth, your face burning hot and cold, your eyes hearing only scribbles, your legs telling you they only see void with nothing to stand on.
But... the static has disappeared. Your simplest thoughts are no longer charged with electricity, and by narrowing your focus, blocking out sensations, you can act.
You close your eyes tight, clenching your teeth and ignoring exterior sensations. You reach out a wing in the direction of the fuzzy desk you saw, but as you do, you feel a tight and unyielding grip around your wrist. And then...
You suddenly are weightless, your body is now swimming through the air. You feel light and free. But just as suddenly, your swimming is halting, your head is slammed against a hard surface. Your wings and shoulder settle and feel similar hard surfaces. Your think your tail feels yet another, but you try to tune it all out.
-eep quiet. Don't move or-
skkkrrrrr
SkKkKkKkRrRrRrReOh, this...
SSSKKKKRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRis...
worrisome...
You hear a harsh scraping sound coming from everywhere, all around you. The ground tremors as your body instinctively trieds to brace itself. Your skin prickles in fright at overwhelming sensation of death. But, just as suddenly as everything started, silence and stillness soon embraces everything.
You mind has still remained fuzzy, so you don't know how long you remain here in this state before...
The loud and sharp sickly sweet drone returns. You clench your talons, but the static does not return. But your senses begin to crowd once again at the booming voice.
I have not registered anyone visiting as of late by the name of Talo. I have consistantly remained ever vigilant of new arrivals and potential industrial espionage that they may bring.
Your senses crowd. You mind immediately turns to fuzz. All your world becomes a jumble. The booming voice you were hearing disappears completely. As you strain what you think are your ears, you can hardly make out anything at this point
Every sound is the faintest whisper.
-what does this ------ look ------ -
Instead of focusing on the voices causing these issues, you retreat back into your own thoughts. Your senses are jumbled, you need to forget them. You need to distract yourself. You need to think of something else, anything or anythings else. As long as it something, anything, that can keep you distracted.
What do you do?
What do you think of?
What do you think of?
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TALO NOOOOOOO ;;;;;;
TALO THINK OF. SOMETHING TO GROUND YOURSELF MAYBE? Think of, your friends?
I DO NOT KNOW WHAT TO THINK UHWhat do you do?
What do you think of?
TALO THINK OF. SOMETHING TO GROUND YOURSELF MAYBE? Think of, your friends?
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YOUR DESCRIPTION OF WHAT TALO IS GOING THROUGH IS SO INTERESTINGLY WRITTEN BTW
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Talooo oh god you're in a bad spot... how about thinking back on your experience with your previous death, to mentally ground/ready yourself just in case? might motivate you to fight back
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DreamyPumpkins wrote: ↑12 Jul 2024, 18:49 TALO THINK OF. SOMETHING TO GROUND YOURSELF MAYBE? Think of, your friends?
Why is your mind going to that of all places? You can feel yourself reflexively clenching your talons tightly, but you don't fight it. You lost every friend you made, afterall, and it is only natural to feel this burning anger at that.They are all gone, leaving you by your poor lonesome. After Kara betrayed you, after Haytian died, after Mistle disappeared, after Soro was murdered in cold blood, after everything single thing Rieyyuh has done, let alone what those unproductive and self-centered Syyio Gods have been doing to avoid any involvement.
Sure, you have companions, and you may put on a happy face among them, but 'friends' are trouble in the end and that is a good enough reason to kept distant from them.
You are alone, free to do what you please now.
You are alone! Nothing to hold you back, as you push forward.
You are all alone! Able to do what is necessary to survive and do what is needed.
You are all alone, indeed...
ClefdeSoll wrote: ↑15 Jul 2024, 19:01 Talooo oh god you're in a bad spot... how about thinking back on your experience with your previous death, to mentally ground/ready yourself just in case? might motivate you to fight back
... All alone, just like your first visit to that dark abyss awaiting rebirth.
It was so long ago, but it is always so fresh on your mind. The pitch darkness surrounding everywhere, the endless voices calling out, the numb but everpresent feelings.
But you know this old memory of that dark abyss is not what awaits you. It awaits nobody. It is a figment of the past.
You silently choke back tears.
That day really did change everything, didn't it? The day the news broke the God of Life and Death had been finally slain, having been assassinated on that street that day, it is still as fresh on your mind as anything else...
And it was the celebration of the tenth anniversary of that day only a few days ago, wasn't it? Or maybe it was a few months ago. Such time doesn't really much to you now, and you have been too far away from civilization to keep up to date. You have been stubbornly and foolishly delving into these lost and ancient ruins where the passage of time outside means nothing, and they are simply as much of your home now as any other place in your life. You endlessly dive through them, searching and searching for who knows what, and maybe one day you will become just as lost as these ruins are and nobody will notice.
You still can't help but have your mind wander to how grand those celebration back at the wherever they held the ceberation would have been. You can only imagine how Kara and Rieyyuh would be there, and how they would have happily welcomed you back. How you could just walk among people again, and not be surrounded by constant danger and loss. How Kara there would know where all the best wonderful treats are and how those sweet and delicious those would have been on your tongue. Or how Rieyyuh would chat and talk with wisdom beyond his years, and probably even more now after all this time.
They would absolutely have to know you are still alive. They have to, so it wouldn't be that surprising, right? To just reappear one day, all fine and healthy, and to live out a peaceful life with them, to be with them again. To live out the rest of your life without worrying about these stupid ancient ruins, the creepy inhabitants, those malignant curses and lifeless robots and these disorientating mind and sensory manipulations.
The safety of the dark abyssal egg returns back to your mind. The dark and soothing depths of the water. The protective shell, that was knitting your being back together, that you so foolishly pushed through. But those red eyes were filled with interest on the determination on display. But you were not determined that day, you were frightened. The overwhelming and endless voices that echoed in your head that day still haunt you. It was so long ago, but it still repeatly goes through your mind over and over to this day. How you wish to return back to that egg, though. To be there under the watchful gaze of those soothing red eyes...
To be comforted again... to be cared for and watched over... to know there is something out there to care for you.
You want to be back in that egg, to know everything is safe. To be cry out freely among the other many needy voices without being judged...
to just live... and heal... and to thrive... and...
to be able to cry out for attention when needed...
BIII-BEEEP!! BIII-BEEEEEEP!! BIIIII-BEEEEEP!!
You hear a muffled but annoying and all too vaguely familiar sound pierce through your thoughts. And you very shortly feel something poking quickly all around behind you.
BIII-BEEP!! BIII-BEEEP!! BIII-BEEP!!
Rrrrrrkkkpp.
You hear something ripping and the beeping get louder as you feel a light pressure on your body get lighter.
BIIIIIIII-BEEP!! BIII-BEEEEP!! BIIIII-BE-
You suppress a groan as you clench your talons more, having to be subject to this constant chatter now.There, fixed. Apologies, my Meritorious Executor. This device was returned as lost and found by a previous visitor and it still goes off from time to time. I still await the day it will be retreived.
You clench your talons tighter as more static returns.
SSsSSssSSsssSskKKrRrrrRRrRkrRrRrRrrRRrrKrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
But... the stinging static eases as the rumbling scrapes disappear... the sweet and sharp drone fades. The room falls silent for a moment. You head aches. You feel your wing being nudged. You keep your eyes closed tight, embracing the quiet darkness. Before you feel another nudge. And another. And yet another.
You whack the mechanical arm away as you just keep your eyes closed for another few peaceful moments. The arm does not bother you again.It is okay to get out from under there now, you know? I can see your life signs still read you as conscious.
You take a deep breath. Your body overall feels weird. Every sensation feel off and slightly mixed, but those mix-ups are also fading. You take another deep breath as you feel comfort in your entire body being pressed against the surrounding desk, encasing your body in its protection. You let out a gentle sigh.
You are safe, calm and back.
What do you do?
What do you do?
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oh this is...
hm.
i imagine talo would want to stay in his dream, but unless he's executed soon, he's gonna have to wake up at some point.
hm.
i imagine talo would want to stay in his dream, but unless he's executed soon, he's gonna have to wake up at some point.
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WHAT THE HECK HAPPENED BETWEEN THE TALO COMIC AND NOW?? OH MY GOD TALO NEEDS A HUG AND A NICE BLANKET. The Scaled One... is dead? That poses many questions... who slew them? What happened to Talo's friends? (I am not really expecting answers, as they are probably spoilers!!)
The reason I say if safe is -- I have a feeling this is not. The desk robot? A bit confused on it if I am being honest. But we know someone is communicating with this "Executor". And knows about Talo, and thinks he is some kind of agent?
And the upside-down text I belieeeeeve is...
UHhhhhhhh. Deep breaths... leave the desk. Ask the robot for water maybe?? IF... SAFE?You are safe, calm and back.
What do you do?
There, fixed. Apologies, my Meritorious Executor. This device was returned as lost and found by a previous visitor and it still goes off from time to time. I still await the day it will be retreived.
The reason I say if safe is -- I have a feeling this is not. The desk robot? A bit confused on it if I am being honest. But we know someone is communicating with this "Executor". And knows about Talo, and thinks he is some kind of agent?
And the upside-down text I belieeeeeve is...
Is this correct?I MUST CONTINUE THE HUNT FOR TALO. BE VIGILANT FOR ANY MORE VILE AGENTS.
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// heavy sigh as you force yourself back into reality.
// i can read all the text, but i feel that in the moment talo wouldn't be able to understand it.
// probably just ask for water, like pump said.
// but i imagine talo would be really suspicious of the robots after what just happened.
i think... talo needs to rest and take a break somewhere... needs love, a lot of it.
// i can read all the text, but i feel that in the moment talo wouldn't be able to understand it.
// probably just ask for water, like pump said.
// but i imagine talo would be really suspicious of the robots after what just happened.
i think... talo needs to rest and take a break somewhere... needs love, a lot of it.
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oh boy all the implications happening here...!! my baby is traumatized this is what happens when you don't get drawn every day in a row apparently smh
ANYWAY, take a moment to recenter yourself! And try to look around and find a way forward, I think moving along and getting out of here should help. but be careful!!
ANYWAY, take a moment to recenter yourself! And try to look around and find a way forward, I think moving along and getting out of here should help. but be careful!!